We're getting VEEEERY close to releasing the PDF of the game's "vision book" to backers and sending it off to printers to make hard copies.
But before we do, we need your help. We are posting the raw text for each section of the book here. We've written a lot, and we need to know:
1) Typos, grammatical errors and word choice issues.
2) Any areas that seem confusing or contradictory and could use some cleanup
Note that we didn't ask for feedback on the game ideas themselves. That will come later. For now our focus is on getting the book ready for print.
So please, pick a section, read it, and help us proof-read it for print! We will post all sections so far, plus some new ones, with more to come over the weekend.
Thank you!!!!
P.S. Do not leave your edits here, post them to the relevant section thread. TY!
But before we do, we need your help. We are posting the raw text for each section of the book here. We've written a lot, and we need to know:
1) Typos, grammatical errors and word choice issues.
2) Any areas that seem confusing or contradictory and could use some cleanup
Note that we didn't ask for feedback on the game ideas themselves. That will come later. For now our focus is on getting the book ready for print.
So please, pick a section, read it, and help us proof-read it for print! We will post all sections so far, plus some new ones, with more to come over the weekend.
Thank you!!!!
P.S. Do not leave your edits here, post them to the relevant section thread. TY!
