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    NEW Section - Resources & Crafting

    "Everything in the game is crafted by players, even bases and base fortifications such as automated weapon systems, defenses and buildings, are improved through the gathering and use of resources." Commas and stuff be missing/ Also a bit of a run on, after saying vases and base fortifications...
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    Grummz' Navel Thread

    If anything that helo is hostile to the woman, odd since I don't know of any countries equipped with AH-64s and Abrams that would likely fight each other. First, firing a 30mm cannon at a metal target at that close proximity will produce shrapnel and bounce rounds off that she will easily be...
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    Grummz' Navel Thread

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    We Need Your Help - Community Proofing Project

    Any ETA on the Invasions and crafting ones? I'm curious both so I can work on them, and so I can read them.
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    SECTION (NEW) - Terraforming & Mining

    "Outside of invasions, terraforming and mining are the other primary goals of the player." Reads a bit unclear given my knowledge of the game. Invasions aren't the goal for the player to go after, so much as something they defend or react against. This reads kind of like us going and invading...
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    Section - Lore (Ver 2 Edit)

    "Some had two heads, others hand wings and claws," hand should be had.
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    Section - Omniframes (ver 2 edited)

    I'm getting a bit tired of reading walls of text so I'm skimming a bit more and so probably missing more stuff, but here's what I did catch. "Light frames can be tailored for support roles such as healing, engineering (deployables), stealth and recon (snipers, etc.)." Missing a comma after...
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    Section - Kaiju

    "Kaiju is the Japanese word for “strange beast.” In Em-8ER, the word represents both the smaller creatures players fight, all the way to the giant monsters that can rip bases apart with their bare claws." Includes the word both, but later sentence structure doesn't support it very well. Perhaps...
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    Section - Base Building

    "One of the player’s main objectives in Em-8ER" I hate apostrophes but pretty sure that should be... One of the players main objectives in Em-8ER... ----- "All buildings have building times, and those times can be accelerate by additional resources." Accelerate should be accelerated. -----...
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    Section - Dev Plans & Episodic Release

    "This is where a THMPR is dropped onto the ground and begins to mine, and you must defend the THMPR from Tsi-Hu aliens that attack it to attempt to disrupt your mining activity." This sentence reads weird, with the and right before the and after the comma, and the "attack it to" and such. It's...
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    Section - Gameplay Goals

    "In Em-8ER players are explorers" In Em-8ER, players are explorers... Without a comma that sounds really weird, implying... in ember players, are explorers... rather than, in ember, players are explorers... -------- "Their war machines of giant Kaiju creatures versus the humans in their MEK...
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    A matter of F.A.Q.

    Q: What is a THMPR? A: A THMPR is a large mining robot that can be used to extract resources from the environment. Players will have to protect it from enemies while it finishes mining before escorting it back to a friendly location to drop off the resources. Q: Is Em-8ER going to have levels...
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    Grummz' Navel Thread

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    Last Letter game

    Ifrit
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    KEEP ONE / CHANGE ONE - GAME

    Monster Hunter
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    Happy Birthday Grummz!

    Happy Birthday from me and my hammer wielding omniframe!